That was amazing. I'm so glad you wrote this. It had all the elements of a good horror story. What I loved most though was that in the end the Good Guys didn't kill The Monster, they just passed it on and let it be. And Kradam <3. Michael was hilarious, I adored Daisy and Frank, and Joseph is one sneaky bastard. xD
The culture of New Orleans was jumping off the page. You made it so easy to just insert yourself into the streets or Simon's. I love how you didn't make Adam into 'damaged goods.' It was cute how he admitted he had a perfectly wonderful life to Kris.
Also: the last couple sentences were the best ever. The end.
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That was amazing. I'm so glad you wrote this. It had all the elements of a good horror story. What I loved most though was that in the end the Good Guys didn't kill The Monster, they just passed it on and let it be. And Kradam <3. Michael was hilarious, I adored Daisy and Frank, and Joseph is one sneaky bastard. xD
The culture of New Orleans was jumping off the page. You made it so easy to just insert yourself into the streets or Simon's. I love how you didn't make Adam into 'damaged goods.' It was cute how he admitted he had a perfectly wonderful life to Kris.
Also: the last couple sentences were the best ever. The end.