I am so impressed with this story. You put in some serious research that, coupled with the sparkling dialogue, made the words totally jump off the page. Perfect balance between plot and relationship which is not an easy thing to do at all. Like another commentor said it really did have a 'cinematic' feel to it. Loved it!
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Date: 2010-04-16 02:11 pm (UTC)