Meme The First!
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I've never done a meme before. Let's see how it goes! Via
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Pick one of my fics, and I'll give you three details that didn't make it into the fic. Background canon, deleted scenes, or a look into the future. My choice, but if you have a specific question you can ask it in your request.
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Pick one of my fics, and I'll give you three details that didn't make it into the fic. Background canon, deleted scenes, or a look into the future. My choice, but if you have a specific question you can ask it in your request.
Re: Community Rules for Hauntings – Deleted Scene, 3/3
Date: 2011-09-08 04:23 am (UTC)I actually thought the scene was really effective - it wouldn't have worked because it was from Adam's POV and everything else is from Kris's but I love that we got this glimpse so that we can see what exactly happened when Adam went over there and why he's so mad when he goes back to his place.
And now I keep thinking of that scene where it's like in the doorway when they're trying to contact it or figure out how to get rid of it and holy cow, I shouldn't be thinking of that while staring at the empty, dark doorway of my office. Creepy. Damn.
But I loved getting to see this, thanks for sharing it! :D
Re: Community Rules for Hauntings – Deleted Scene, 3/3
Date: 2011-09-08 04:31 am (UTC)[excerpt from the voodoo seance scene]
The lights flicker.
"What the-" Adam says, suddenly alert.
Theresa's and Michael's eyes are closed, but Joseph looks around and then at the two of them with surprise.
Kris reaches out and grabs Adam's hand, holds his breath and prays it was just an electrical surge.
The lights flicker again, and this time Kris feels it, the brushing of something against the back of his neck, all the hair on his body suddenly standing straight up. "It's," he warns Adam, squeezing his hand as tight as he can. It's whispering. No, laughing. It's in the bedroom watching them, and Kris stares at the dark doorway, the bedroom door they hadn't bothered to shut hanging open. Was it just his eyes playing tricks, or did the door just swing an inch wider?
"What is it, Kris?" Joseph asks, studying him carefully. "Do you feel something?"
"It's here," Kris says. All eyes open and turn on him, looking for more information. "It's in the bedroom."
"What does it feel like? Can you describe it?"
"Keep your breathing calm," Theresa says in therapist-mode.
"It's." And how can Kris possibly describe it when he can't hear it, can't see it, can't touch it? He just knows.
The bedroom door slams shut and everyone gasps.
Re: Community Rules for Hauntings – Deleted Scene, 3/3
Date: 2011-09-08 04:48 am (UTC)Thank goodness I sleep with the door closed and locked anyway. LOL.
Re: Community Rules for Hauntings – Deleted Scene, 3/3
Date: 2011-09-08 04:57 am (UTC)Sleep well...
...yes, that is a creepy ellipses. Deal with it. ;D
Re: Community Rules for Hauntings – Deleted Scene, 3/3
Date: 2011-09-08 05:10 am (UTC)LMAO, oh fine. Go ahead and be creepy. Complete with creepy punctuation! (I imagine that 'sleep well' said in a Vincent Price voice, for the record. Thanks, Thriller, thanks.)